2x Task 1 Model Essays
Jun14

2x Task 1 Model Essays

Question 1 The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. These two pie charts show information about household energy use in Australia and the resulting greenhouse emissions. While heating is the greatest use of energy, it is not the greatest producer of greenhouse gases. Greenhouse gases are produced by water...

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2 Model IELTS Essays
Jun11

2 Model IELTS Essays

Task 1 Describe this graph: The line graph shows the price of food and oil around the world over eleven years, from 2000 to 2011. There is a high degree of correlation between the price of food and the price of oil, which largely rise or fall together over the period. In 2000, the food price index stood at about 90, steadily rising over the next seven years, except for a slight fall around 2002. Between 2007 and 2008, the price...

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Unethical Adverts: A Model IELTS Essay
May30

Unethical Adverts: A Model IELTS Essay

Question Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? Model Answer If a company wants to increase awareness about its products, it must engage in some form of advertising. For this reason, adverts are everywhere that we look, including TV, the internet, posters, and billboards. Some adverts are very innovative and informative, but others...

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Sample Answer for a Recent Task 2 Question
May22

Sample Answer for a Recent Task 2 Question

The following question appeared recently in the IELTS Writing Task 2: Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How can we answer a question like this? We need to carefully analyse the question, then brainstorm and organize our ideas, before finally writing a structured essay. Sample Answer Not...

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Model Answer: IELTS Writing Task 1 – Bar Chart
May02

Model Answer: IELTS Writing Task 1 – Bar Chart

Here’s a band 9.0 answer for the IELTS Writing Task 1 describing a bar chart. Question The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Model Answer The bar chart shows the estimated population of elephants across nine different...

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Annotated IELTS Essay
Apr12

Annotated IELTS Essay

Recently, I’ve given my readers a few guides to writing a good IELTS Writing Task 2 essay. It want to make sure that all the people using this website are able to boost their IELTS Writing band score, so I’m going to continue giving free tips and advice, as well as example essays. Today, I’m going to give you a sample band 9 essay for the following question: Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal...

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