The purpose of this blog post is to add corrections from the IELTS Writing Feedback Facebook group. In this group, I will offer occasional free corrections for your essays and letters from the IELTS writing exam (general and academic).
If you want a professional service, I also offer a full Writing Correction Service. <– You can click the link to find out more. In short, the corrections I give back on the Facebook group take me just 5-10 minutes to make. I make some basic correction and a little feedback, and there is no guarantee that I will get to your essay if there are many other people asking.
However, paid essays are guaranteed to be marked within a certain time period, take me a long time to complete, and receive the following:
- extensive marking
- detailed suggestions
- an estimated band score
- a band 9 sample answer
I want to offer both free and premium services. The documents below are Google Drive files containing corrections from students’ submissions to the free Facebook group. Please join in, post your writing, and I’ll mark what I can. 🙂
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October 27th, 2018 [TASK 1]
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Hi. I am a student from China, and I am struggling with my writing. I really want to have my essay corrected, so how can I pay for this service?
Hello Keira,
Thanks for your inquiry. You can find details on this page: https://ted-ielts.com/writing-correction-service/
You can also e-mail me at david@ted-ielts.com. I prefer payment via Paypal, but if you are struggling to make that from China, I can also manage Alipay.
Best,
David
The number of people using the Internet at this time is increasing significantly. however, before the people who are use the internet was simple number. This essay will discuss about the buying things on the internet, and it is will cover both the advantages and the disadvantage.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits considerably outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for believing this because it is more cheaper for the customers to have a shopping online, and in the same time this help them to save their time to do some work they are have not done. One good illustration of this is amazon shop. In addition to that the number of customer use online shopping, it is increases in the last five years. From these, we will know the online shopping is more important for this people who do not have time.
On the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact it is cheating in goods. One clear example is that when customers buying online shopping the goods is coming different or not work. For this reason, a lot of the people, they love to go to the mall shop to have look the goods to can know what they are going buy. One evident benefit to having look what they are going buy, it know the goods are work or not, and in the same moment, they can test the goods.
In conclusion , as we have seen, there are no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that the shopping online is important for some people and it easily to buy and fast. However, another customers this the shopping online have a lot cheating in goods.