If you look at IELTS websites and YouTube videos, you might learn that cohesive devices are very important and that you should use as many of them as possible.
Read the guide : How to Use Cohesive Devices Correctly [for IELTS Writing]Some people had posted their IELTS essays for others to give feedback, and one of them included a screenshot from a bad website that gives you an estimated band score for your IELTS writing.
Read the guide : How to Use Cohesive Devices Effectively for IELTS WritingRemember: repetition sounds really bad in English, and replacing the word "very" in your sentences is an easy way to make yourself sound better.
Read the guide : 9 Ways to Improve your Language for IELTS
